Eisah Eisah’s Reviews > Ascendance of a Bookworm (Light Novel), Part 1 Volume 3 > Status Update

"My body heated up as if all the blood inside me was boiling,"- print

"My body heated up as if all the blood in my body was boiling,"- e-book

At times I feel like the copy of the e-book from the library is the older version of the book and the print copy has more corrections. Things like using the word "body" twice in the same sentence are clunky, and the print version here feels like the 'fixed up' version.

Again, an error only in the e-book:
"The temple was ready for us and as soon as we reached the gate, and a gray priest..."

An extra 'and' in there.

In the e-book, "I clenched my first". It's correct in print.

"What good am I for..."

I feel like this is a mangled "What am I good for" or "What good am I if".

"...so the master had not met a child he needed to take of so dearly himself before now."

This confuses me so. I'm sure I know what they meant to say, but it feels like remnants of an old sentence got left behind in the editing process.

"...instantly I could feel body tilt."

Should be "my body". This error seems to be in print and e-book.

Switches between "gray" and "grey".

"Mark rose a hand" in the e-book.

"Mark raised a hand" in the print.

There were tons of changes between the e-book and print, so I stopped listing them for now.

But, the print version has, "Not like Lutz's, he's all cheeky and mean now."

This is corrected in the e-book.

"then started to explain." - print

"and opened my mouth." - e-book