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I skipped chapters 4-7 to pick up chapter 8: Conclusion.

Chapter 3 is repetitive at this point. I will now be an expert on the creation of Blue's Clues and Sesame Street. Can we move on now

I liked the intro and chapter 1
The beginning of chapter 2 was cool but it got repetitive and a little boring. So I skipped a decent amount of it.

If you're going to threaten to rape her for the ENTIRE book, just do it already and stop saving her just seconds before everytime. Christ.

Rewrite: Have the captain keep Sail as prisoner, but make him watch everytime Captain Fane takes Auren.
How can you not love Digby and Sail?

His father almost father-in-law and almost life should all be killed for their War crimes. They do not get the right to sit out in jail for the rest of their lives

I wasn't actually expecting her to kill off the brother

You're telling me that he's about to get killed on a firing line but you have time to run back to your apartment to find a letter and then get all the way back to where he is? That is the most unrealistic thing that I have ever heard

The explanation of why the goddess couldn't kill him was appreciated but the underground battle was so rushed. Daka and Attie were playing musical chairs while Iris was watching. That was the worst writing ever. And then the god falling to sleep and Iris cutting his head off? Again, the writing was laughable. It's like the writer or editor ran out of time and just let the draft get published

Man, im so bored. Instead of a "read" where the data keeps track of those books, they should also have a "DNF"

1. Im bored
2. You're telling me that he just becomes friendly with a stranger pen pale while he is on the fronts with a god?! The fuck?! Yeah, real believable. He's pretty dumb and naive.
3. After this book, and with the exception of TOG, im never reading a story that has teenagers as the main characters again

Wow, that wasn't predictable at all. Her having to go against Kai in the final challenge. What a strange concept that you're letting your betrothed go through all of these trials that could kill her and now you're putting her your betrothed against your brother who is supposed to be this ultimate killer yet she's always the one getting stuff done and he is just her shadow

Why is an Ordinary Girl doing things that the enforcer should be doing this entire time in all these books. He doesn't seem all that big and tough if he's constantly getting outwitted out fought and outsmarted by ordinary. He is all talk and no bite

All of these books were were an order of events. They lacked storytelling through and through. I felt absolutely nothing for any of these characters

The water monster was so absolutely predictable that I skipped over the majority of it just to get it over with

I NEED her to be vulnerable to the boys. Share a bed with kit and wake up to nightmares. Show kit the betrayal and hurt. Give me some sort of character to grab onto bc so far, Pay has been D.U.L.L

In the first book he was talked about being this heartless soulless monster that has done horrific things but we don't see any of that. Now in the second book you're enforcer is getting saved countless times by an Ordinary Girl. Your definition of an enforcer is really lacking

If her cami sits just about hed breasts, but you still can't see the brand that the king gave her, on her chest, then where is the brand? On her boob?

Im already confused by the prolog

This has been such a cringy British read. She is the equivalent of the girl from Me Before You

What happened to his engagement with Patricia?

Did I miss something, or why is there an obsession with Johny Whites?

I love when weak European countries are so worried about what Trump will do. This book was cute until that

There is literally no way that, if she is already petite as is, that in less than a week, she's already lost 5 or 6lbs and the loss can be visibly seen already.... I hated this in the first one and its even more annoying now.

Okay the plot point of Fishers Mother coming to S through his half sister was wild. But to now have it all come together is insane!
That's actually brilliant writing.
The paper birds had been waiting for her for thousands of years; testing her blood to make sure it was truley her that they were to fall open for.
Well done

Stop!!! Onyx gave him a pinecone as a gift!!

The Hazerax reminds me of the creatures from ACOTAR

Wait, im confused. How is he biting her and drawing blood? He's not a vampire....?

She says she barely knows him enough to move in and how it's only been 5 weeks, but she is constantly telling him she loves him

I enjoy her subconscious character