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In Her One Wish it is one of the Genie Counsel who gives her one wish and that is the gift of being ice so no man would be able to hurt her again. Nixie did heal her but it was not in her power to grant any wishes.

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Alador leaves the Ice Queen to check on the children. He is told that the girl is in the east tower while the boy is in the west. He starts walking toward the east tower; however, when the POV changes to him he is in the boys room in the west tower. He then moves to the east tower to check on the sister. Whoever is the beta readers for this series is doing the author a disservice.

Jefferson was the third president.

I think Mr Thacker meant Ben knew knowledge changed as, well, facts changed. Instead of Ben knew knowledge changed as, well, knowledge changed.

First off Spoilers. You have the groups newest ally admit in Chapter 35 to be part of the APS to the group then Bennet who was there in chap 45 play out the big gotcha like it was a divine epiphany. Also the plant that is supposed to be made of Scopamine & grown in Columbia. The cultivar is called Culebra Borrachero. The mother plant is in fact from Ecuador and is extinct in the wild. Its call Golden Amgel's Trumpet

Has the groups leader name two but says you three go meet the enemy. Never finished who the third person was supposed to be.

Great series but I think it could have used a better editing.

In Chapter 3 it misstates how many legs a spider has. Anyone with a spider fear knows they have 8 legs not 6

There are only 15 numbered balls and the 16th is a blank white ball or cue ball. I hate when people make specific items important to the plot and not check to make sure its real.

States Cronus' sons were killed but at the end of the sentence said both sons and daughters survived.

Mr Van Dorn claims that Hebrew has no terms for Grandfather or Great Grandfather. It is wrong unless he forgot to place a footnote showing it. Its true in Genesis that the term doesn't appear but thats because none of the kids seem to stay with the parents.

Its a great premise but with glaring errors. Stating Noah was the father of Cain & Abel. Substituting Abel in for Seth when discussing offspring of Cain & Seth. Placing the wrong Bible verse. Inserting a table of Cain's descendants that shows Lamech had 4 sons but in the text stating there are only 3. The author makes a point in beginning that he hates books on this subject but goes ahead and makes the same mistake.

I enjoyed the story especially the character of Jaxi. The romance doesnt overpower the rest of the story. I cannot wait for the sequel

The problem I am having is either when the Kindle edition was done someone messed with the wording or Mr Mayer is just getting lax with the editing.

In the previous Horace Chase book, Chase stated that Dave Riley was his former team Sgt on the first SF team he was with. they merrt in this book and he says he only knows Riley as a name carved into the ODA table not that he served with him. Maybe itll be brought up later.

At the beginning of the Missions Phase I chapter it gives the wrong name of the character, this along with placing punctuation where it doesn't belong ruin the ambiance of the story. I don't know if this is a fault of Kindle or the author but it'd be great to have it fixed.

I can see the complaints from some readers about the misspelled or errant words. I so far like Alexander as I read it keep hearing him as Ricardo Montalban when he played Mr Rourke on Fantasy Island.

Simon stopped at 2nd floor while Gischala went to the 3rd. Now Simon is racing off on the 3rd floor and Gischala is swinging down from the 3rd floor. Sloppy not knowing where your characters are.

I understand creating tension but having scene set outside the city of Rome but call it a desert seems a major faux pas.

First off there will be a spoilers ahead. I throughly enjoyed the Nephilim/fallen watchers series. I started to laugh at the time blunder by having the doctor meet Paul in July of 64 then again in November of 64 only he says their meeting were years apart rather than months. It may have been Neros thought since he had met the apostle years earlier. it stilled relieved some tension of the scene.

It's really good so far; in the history part Mr Mayer mentioned the Fort Tejon quake as the largest at 7.9 to rock California. He said Californians are waiting for the next one but in 1906 San Francisco was rocked by a 7.9 too.

I love Mr Meyer's early books and for the most part the latest but it does get frustrating when he changes characters names or puts the wrong person speaking. He needs a better proofreader for these newest books. It went from Ivar talking to Old man Finster to Pinster. Or in the first few chapters Ivar is talking only a paragraph later it's Doc but he wasn't in the room.

At the beginning of Chapter 17 it said Crazy Horse was in the Montana Territory in 1968. I know the book has time travel but wow.

I hate continuity errors if youre writing book series please keep track of the story lines. In the other books the hero went to find a black box of a SR-71 in this one its a U-2. Which is it?

I received the book free from Bookbub. I liked that it was written like the Gunsmoke radio shows of the Sheriff being the voice. I did not like that the book kept changing the Sheriff's name. I'm guessing this was an error from the publisher rather than the writer. Otherwise I am enjoying it.