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Robert Mills
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At the beginning of the Missions Phase I chapter it gives the wrong name of the character, this along with placing punctuation where it doesn't belong ruin the ambiance of the story. I don't know if this is a fault of Kindle or the author but it'd be great to have it fixed.
— Jul 25, 2017 02:11AM
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