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Okay, a severed hand has been found, they track the blood: "The smears stopped right under a vent. Two team members went to either side while the rest knelt and fixed their weapons on the opening. At Yanis’s countdown they pried off the vent’s grate and flung their weapons inside."
... Clearly, there is an alien on the ship, and this reads as if it crawled into the vent and closed the grate after itself? What.

Yeah, let's keep the alien egg for 'historic' and 'scientific' reasons. I hope they all die.

Jacklyn is actually thick in the head, come on.

I feel like this is only labelled 'fast-paced' because it's just so incredibly non-descript. I have no sense of what this spaceship is like, not the atmosphere and definitely not the interior.
I'm doing my best to keep going, but I am being tested.

There is a small continuity error here; Briar's hands are unbound in the cave, but when the others find her, suddenly her wrists are tied 🤔

"He had a jaw so straight, it made men question if they were." lmfao

"He had a jaw so straight, it made men question if they were." lmfao

YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW EACH OTHER, YOU'RE SO WEIRD

I'm not that far in, maybe one third, but this is so .. insta-lust/love-y and UGH.
It could do with far more tension and creepy-scary build up.

this plot is so stupiddddddd

Is it miscommunication if they don't talk at all?
It's a bit infuriating to read about a 29-30 year old woman who JUST DOES NOT USE HER BRAIN

It felt like I was dragged to get to this point in the book. I am not loving this, unfortunately, but I do enjoy the authors writing, so no DNF.
However... 58% and a semblance of plot has appeared. 58%.

Hey, so, is it me or is it a little too on the nose that characters are calling the Yautja predators? They couldn't come up with another name?

ALSO, why does the main character Theta have those locks on her stolen predator/Yautja helmet when the locks are a part of the Yautja? You know, like hair usually is?

This main character is unbearably stupid and unlikable.

My eyes are slowly filling with tears as I'm trying to finish this with this unbearably passive and weak female lead as my only companion.

It's a DNF from me.