Jen Leffew > Recent Status Updates

C- 27 freakin 27 and she’s was still going to escape to go bad to daddy grrrrrrrr such a freakin selfish child putting everyone else in danger I love the other characters but I’m not sure if I can continue with this fmc

He just said in his head she looks like a cranky todddler yessssssss I’m so over it

Holy shit there is only so much back a forth and whiny poor me readers can take

Omg and she still ran away like a freaking child

All the other characters I love butttttttt shitttttttttt

H 15 damnnnnnnnn more pouting and poor me I won’t sit in the comfortable chair I won’t I won’t I won’t my lord are you 12

Chapter 13 for the love of god and we have a fmc that isn’t a whilny child brat who throws temper tantrums it would be so much more enjoyable

Ok is she dense they are being chased and shot at and she’s like I don’t have money just let me go ARE YOU STUPID

It’s toward the end and I’m sorry but the bitchyness is annoying

Cp 47 he left you alone instead of complaining about it COMMUNICATING HELPS

Man wish you could have added a lil bit of the rescue

lol omg right up until the end she’s dumb

Ooooo my heart it wasssssss him

He freakin saved you from absolute abuse yet you are still whining that he lied he was in an impossible spot lord fmcs drive me nuts

Omg she is just annoying

Lord whyyyyyyy do they write fmcs so stupid I mean really opening the door

Cp 9 and she can’t see the life he saved her from can someone write a fmc that isnt a stupid ungrateful bitchy brat

Well I like a mean to everyone else but her and he is turning her oversoooo might not be for me

Probably unpopular opinion but her mom is on her hands pisses me off

Omg yes this fmc I can’t stand bitchy the whole book then they both don’t communicate then she gets herself taken freaking stupid book it had so much goin for it with Nico and the found fam but omg

Cp 35 grrrr they both know the damn info freakin talk to each other and finally she’s not being a bitch please don’t let her regress

If I never hear mobster again in this book I’ll b happy damn den of sin was so much better

C- 25 and she’s still ughhhhh I had high hopes but shittttttttt

Omg I’m not sure I can deal much longer everyone is being so nice to you and you are just being a bitch

Ch 21 I love the mmc but 21 chapters of an adult child being bitchy is so flipping annoying to me

How many times can she say mobster lol

Omg chick stop just shut up

Grrrr you will marry me be rich never worry about anything have security travel your girls will never want and in 3 2 1 let’s be a freaking bitch I’ll never understand why this is appealing to some readers

Well this fmc is annoying

Oooooo my lord just tell your dad grrrrr