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Yesssssss this fmc I like

Her ….. he wants to keep me safe ..but from what …. Again can she be anymore stupid ummmmmm you were being shot at someone killed your mom buy a damn vowel if you need to shiiiittttttttttt

Damnnnnn at this point just let her go to the funeral get shot and move on with your damn life

I’m thinking for my sanity I won’t continue to the next books I see reviews saying the fmc is still annoying as fuck but damn it’s a shame I like the other characters

C- 44 she’s at the bar and he comes to get to her and she automatically thinks he knows so he has something to do with it OMG this fmc

And she takes her wedding ring off lord this fmc pisses me off

36 she has a phone she’s going to see her dad she has all the money in the world she has someone who wants her and she’s still complaining like a child brat whyyyyyy

Cp 32. Just call your damn guards this whole chapter is stupid

C- 27 freakin 27 and she’s was still going to escape to go bad to daddy grrrrrrrr such a freakin selfish child putting everyone else in danger I love the other characters but I’m not sure if I can continue with this fmc

He just said in his head she looks like a cranky todddler yessssssss I’m so over it

Holy shit there is only so much back a forth and whiny poor me readers can take

Omg and she still ran away like a freaking child

All the other characters I love butttttttt shitttttttttt

H 15 damnnnnnnnn more pouting and poor me I won’t sit in the comfortable chair I won’t I won’t I won’t my lord are you 12

Chapter 13 for the love of god and we have a fmc that isn’t a whilny child brat who throws temper tantrums it would be so much more enjoyable

Ok is she dense they are being chased and shot at and she’s like I don’t have money just let me go ARE YOU STUPID

It’s toward the end and I’m sorry but the bitchyness is annoying

Cp 47 he left you alone instead of complaining about it COMMUNICATING HELPS

Man wish you could have added a lil bit of the rescue

lol omg right up until the end she’s dumb

Ooooo my heart it wasssssss him

He freakin saved you from absolute abuse yet you are still whining that he lied he was in an impossible spot lord fmcs drive me nuts

Omg she is just annoying

Lord whyyyyyyy do they write fmcs so stupid I mean really opening the door

Cp 9 and she can’t see the life he saved her from can someone write a fmc that isnt a stupid ungrateful bitchy brat

Well I like a mean to everyone else but her and he is turning her oversoooo might not be for me

Probably unpopular opinion but her mom is on her hands pisses me off

Omg yes this fmc I can’t stand bitchy the whole book then they both don’t communicate then she gets herself taken freaking stupid book it had so much goin for it with Nico and the found fam but omg

Cp 35 grrrr they both know the damn info freakin talk to each other and finally she’s not being a bitch please don’t let her regress

If I never hear mobster again in this book I’ll b happy damn den of sin was so much better