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Late work for 4/22: Summary- The main characters are Josh and JB, the story's about how they wanna be overcoming basketball stars. the book takes place in bell home. as the events take place in middle school and a basketball court. one event is where Josh and JB plays basketball the book is a 2014 middle school kids book.

Late work for 4/22: Summary- The main characters are Josh and JB, the story's about how they wanna be overcoming basketball stars. the book takes place in bell home. as the events take place in middle school and a basketball court. one event is where Josh and JB plays basketball the book is a 2014 middle school kids book.

late work for 4/8- static vs dynamic characters: During the crossover Josh and his brother JB have changes through middle school. JB and josh are also reading the giver as they figure out they are attracted to a girl who is new to there school as hair styles change to dreads to short cuts and more.

static vs dynamic characters: During the crossover Josh and his brother JB have changes through middle school. JB and josh are also reading the giver as they figure out they are attracted to a girl who is new to there school as hair styles change to dreads to short cuts and more.

late work for 3/18: Protagonist- The protagonist in my story is JB who is not much of a protagonist only when it comes to certain parts like one time JB was supposed to cut one of joshes dreads from a bet but cut off all of them. "calamity as in if JB hadn't been acting so silly and playing around he would've cut one dread instead of five!" this shows how in this part JB decided to play around and cut more than one.

STORY TYPE: My book is a comedy because of the books funny humor and jokes along the way "At 6:01 we arrive at the game but on my sprint to the gym I slip and the on the mud." that's an example of one of the funny scenes in the book.

STORY TYPE: My book is a comedy because of the book's funny humor and jokes along the way "At 6:01 we arrive at the game but on my sprint to the gym I slip and the on the mud." that's an example of one of the funny scenes in the book.

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this was the book I used the wrong one

STORY TYPE: My book is a comedy because of the books funny humor and jokes along the way "At 6:01 we arrive at the game but on my sprint to the gym I slip and the on the mud." that's an example of one of the funny scenes in the book.

STORY TYPE: My book is a comedy because of the books funny humor and jokes along the way "At 6:01 we arrive at the game but on my sprint to the gym I slip and the on the mud." that's an example of one of the funny scenes in the book.

STORY TYPE: My book is a comedy because of the books funny humor and jokes along the way "At 6:01 we arrive at the game but on my sprint to the gym I slip and the on the mud." that's an example of one of the funny scenes in the book.

Setting: The setting usually changes and has taken place at school, a basketball court, church and at home. It is present day. One scene takes place on Sunday after church. "When the prayers end and the doors open the bells hit center stage and the curtain opens up on the afternoon pick-up game in the gym at county recreation center. PG. 57

4/22 predictions. The predictions i made of the book is that he is going to be a basketball star based off of the way he acts. "See, when i play ball im on fire. when i shoot i inspire" those make me think he's working to be a basket ball star.

TOPIC: Audience and Purpose. The book was made for teens my age, the book rhymes so easily you can tell it's like a poem. The words are in different fonts each time the book hits a rhyme. But in my opinion, the book was made for someone specifically a teen my age. The main character is almost 13 and he is in middle school. The characters talk about things that middle schoolers talk about.

Supporting Characters: The supporting character in my book is Jordan Bell, he's brought up but not a lot as Josh or "Filthy McNasty". JB or Joshes twin brother likes to play basketball as well, his favorite character is Micheal Jordan, but what he loves more then basketball is betting. "If its ninety degrees outside and the sky is cloudless, he will bet you that it's going to rain." pg. 15

VISUAL: When I read I visualize Filthy playing basketball. I read the words and see as his hair flies up when he jumps high from the ground getting higher and higher till the basketballs side finally hits the hoop. Entering the circle of the hoop the net swinging left to right. The fiberglass still trembling. "The gym is a LOUD, crowded circus. My stomach is a roller coaster." BOO YAH! his dad says being the loudest.

POV: My book is written in first-person. When Josh is playing basketball, he says "Dribbling at the top of the key, I'm moving and grooving popping and rocking. "why you bumping?" why you locking, man take this thing thumping. Be careful though, cause now I'm crunking.

Perspective: Dribbling at the top of the key i'm moving and grooving popping and rocking. "why you bumping?" why you locking, man take this thing thumping. Be careful though, cause now i'm crunking.

INCITING: The inciting incident in the book "Messy" is when Max finally becomes an actress and her dream job being the lead actress. This is something she really wanted to do and she was broke so she needed the money.

on pg.50 the text says “had her subconscious decided that being some girl’s ghost-blogger sounded fun, in that exact instant the job became so obviously untenable?” My evidence supports my claim because it explains about Brooke and her blogging. part 2

Quest: Brooke Berlin is a sixteen year old who gets obsessed with fame and her movie-star dads attention. Brooke decides to take her career another step and starts a blog about the “it girl.” part one

A minor character would be Brooke, I haven't really gotten into much of the book with her but I know she's a very bossy character. An example would be on page. 38 chapter 4, "BROOKE ALWAYS EXPECTED things to go her way" What i imagine from Brooke is that she would be one of the mean girls. Or one of the, my dad owns the State of Missouri!

VISUALIZE: On the beginning of pg. 24 i visualize the color of the wallpaper she describes "finally settling on the gray-and-red paisley wallpaper that was peeling in several places." I could visualize the paisley peeling wallpaper. If i could describe the visualize i am seeing it would be a grey background with red paisley.
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max has a really hard time writing just like me whenever i'm writing something for school. its not good enough. something is always in the way.

I think max is like a cool character. She's a little bit of everything. Sometimes he's sarcastic. She doesn't have just one particular feeling I think she would be human like but gives me this weird sad feeling.

I'm currently on the same page. because i started on a new book. Messy, I wanted to see what the book messy was like. So There is no antagonist at this moment. I will be sure to update you at any time.

Love and Peaches the book is Fiction. The reason it is fiction is if you look on the first page in the book and look under the bar code it says Fiction.
You can also find it on the copyright page. And on google chrome (or safari)

the book is the same nobody really changes. the book doesn't show any proof on how they change. there mentaly changed but not physically changed bc she still looks the same but acts different.