Averyn Terrell’s Reviews > Messy > Status Update

INCITING: The inciting incident in the book "Messy" is when Max finally becomes an actress and her dream job being the lead actress. This is something she really wanted to do and she was broke so she needed the money.

on pg.50 the text says “had her subconscious decided that being some girl’s ghost-blogger sounded fun, in that exact instant the job became so obviously untenable?” My evidence supports my claim because it explains about Brooke and her blogging. part 2

A minor character would be Brooke, I haven't really gotten into much of the book with her but I know she's a very bossy character. An example would be on page. 38 chapter 4, "BROOKE ALWAYS EXPECTED things to go her way" What i imagine from Brooke is that she would be one of the mean girls. Or one of the, my dad owns the State of Missouri!

VISUALIZE: On the beginning of pg. 24 i visualize the color of the wallpaper she describes "finally settling on the gray-and-red paisley wallpaper that was peeling in several places." I could visualize the paisley peeling wallpaper. If i could describe the visualize i am seeing it would be a grey background with red paisley.
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max has a really hard time writing just like me whenever i'm writing something for school. its not good enough. something is always in the way.

I think max is like a cool character. She's a little bit of everything. Sometimes he's sarcastic. She doesn't have just one particular feeling I think she would be human like but gives me this weird sad feeling.