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The writing is basic and the story keeps floating into useless scenes from the past.

If no one can remember her and she can’t have pictures taken, how did she travel from France to Europe?

It’s so slow and nothing has happened even though it’s over half way. 😑

How degrading…

Too long and boring.

More than halfway in and I still don’t know what the secret organization at the school does. And the chemistry between the two MC are not very deep, just surface level with not much chemistry.

Omg why is this so boring????

Kind of boring…no chemistry between man characters and confusing world.

Whoa….Arthur standing up for Vera in front of his people… Hot! 🥵 not to mention how he changed her flowers every week!!

Love Vera’s close friendship with Lancelot, but I hope it doesn’t end up like the stories from the future. It’ll break my heart if they end up together. I’m pining for Vera and Arthur!

Viktoria: *gets kidnapped, spanked, fxcked, and has absolutely no notable conversations or interactions with Rourke*

Also Viktoria: I’m in love with him.

Omgggggg FMC is soooo freaking annoying. I thought she was smart and strong but why did the author have to make her a dumb, jealous girl towards the end? She just assumed because he has a mate, that he played with her feelings, yet the man spent the whole book loving and protecting her. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

Her parents took her away from the world at 5 years old and she did not see her grandpa, uncle, or cousins until 16 years later. The story starts when she’s only been back home for 3 weeks or so, yet she has become BFF’s with her cousins and would do anything to save their lives?? And she remembers her grandpa so well because his words impacted her growing up?? How could she have remembered that much at that age?

Sooooo repetitive! My lord husband, my bear, baby…ughhh. The writing is also juvenile. The FMC sounds like a child.

It’s boring. Can’t tell if it’s due to the narrator or the story. Probably both.

MMC is supposedly so powerful and scary yet acts like a little kid. Makes big plans and says/do things without thinking. #turnoff 🤮

Where’s the storyline? Need more substance and character depth.

“I can handle a lot.”

Girl, be honest, you can’t. MMC literally funded your whole life and you acted like a brat after he bailed you out of jail. Now acting all tough. Ugh.

It’s so slow and dragging. I have to take a break from it for a couple days.

Loved every minute of it! The detail, the story building, everything! Anxiously waiting to see how Helena and Caine’s love story unfolds. My guess is she blocked her memories to protect the bad side from finding out that Caine was their inside man. She’s endured so much. 🥺

The moment they finally slept together felt underwhelming. They had so much pent up chemistry, but the sex turned out so bland.

It’s slow pacing but wow. I’m invested in every scene.

Poor girl has been suffering for 800 years 🥺 the author does a good job at writing such an evil mother.

FMC is dumb and naive for someone almost 30 years old. She sleeps with him two times and is suddenly crazy about him and labels them as a couple. He tells her he’s a dangerous man and he’s protecting her by keeping her in the shadows yet the first thing she does after that discussion was go to his very public birthday party. Come on…..🤦🏻‍♀️

The twists could be seen from a hundred miles away. FMC so focused on d*ck that she never saw anything coming.

This is giving “we have Fourth Wing at home.”
UNORIGINAL with SUPER predictable plot and an ANNOYING FMC.