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OMG
I AM SO SHOOK.
WDYM SHES GONE?!!
Omds no wonder we never heard about Esther during the day. Omds Omds Omds 😭😭😭😭😭
Wth man!!!!

This story has a slow start. I mean I’m interested and the neighbours are clearly very weird. The lady next door was low-key triggering me. I can see now that this story is a mystery suspense type. It’s getting clearer but icl I feel a bit down and lazy to go on because of the slowness but also because I know she loses this battle. Prologue she was in the mental hospital so I’m a little upset about that.

Lulu has so much going on in her head I don’t even know how to fix it for her.

Done with chapter 5 and I still don’t know what the book is about. Although now it’s giving off a supernatural eerie and suspense vibe.
In the chapter it was briefly mentioned that her husband might start travelling. She freaked out a bit but idk I saw it as a great opportunity for freedom. He doesn’t help anyway. Her concerns are valid though.

Strong first chapter. I mean I still don’t know what the book is about but what I can see is a clear and obvious problem.
She’s slyly convincing herself that everything is fine when it’s not. She’s revealed that she got coerced into accepting her life rn. Also obvious signs of Postpartum etc.

This book is low-key rage baiting me in the worst way. Luca is angering me. The story is taking a very annoying turn and I hate how it’s painting Giana as the villain here. The trigger her, insult her and then she’s still expected to not react. Also I’m annoyed at her lack of injuries as if she wasn’t in that car dodging bullets. Where’s the empathy towards her.

I just clocked Valentina has no self respect. A shame truly.
This is such a good concept of a story and if done right it would have banged. Unfortunately what I’ve picked up from author (after reading 2 of her mafia books before this) is that there’s never true depth to the story. Only spice.
Disappointing.

Valentina is better than me cause I would have just ignored him, took my L and started living my life. Flirt here and there. Shop. Gym. Hell I’d even consider starting a business to busy myself.
I’d even move to another room and decorate it to my liking.
I never needed a man. Ever.

Good book so far. I don’t understand why she’s not making him suffer more. Had the perfect leverage cause he is the guilty party. Mxm. Why aren’t we talking about why and where she got that note and key. Is the cousin involved with this or was she being a girls girl and warning her inlaw. Why would she risk her life to warn Aria even though they’re not close. Does she hate Luca? These are the questions.

Omds I just realised why this dumb ass girl is about to make things worse for her husband. Omds. Cassio has been trying hard to hide this story from Luca but now hes about to know cause dummy over here just can’t do the simple thing of going home. Literally Cassio would have resolved this. Omds.

Man wtf is going on. Has Giulia lost her mind. So instead of just telling her husband about the mess his father made. She’s over here going back and forth in a pregnant state to talk to everyone BUT her husband. Like what was the point of going to her parents place when she knew how they were. Now she’s going to LUCA of all people. Making a big unnecessary mess.

So far so good. The book is written well. I like the story so far. I really do like the mystery behind what happened to the wife. Like it seems infidelity was involved and the son saw some of it that’s why he’s scared of his father.
I’m really intrigued.
I also want Giulia to go out and mingle with other wives. I need to know more about their circle and society.

So far the writing is good. The story is off to an emotional and interesting start.
I obv don’t like the age difference but I’ll keep reading. Hopefully it doesn’t cringe me out.

Idk if I’m the type of boring reader who hates bad things always happening or if urban fic writers have a trauma fetish. I knew something else was gonna happen. Really I expected another act of violence. Or a miscarriage. But now their baby has Down syndrome. I hate that. Erin has been through so much. It’s almost unfair. It’s uncomfortable subject cause those babies deserve love too.

Took me a while to get into reading again but we’re here. So yea so far it’s cool. First book still better buy we’re not done yet. Erin is a fool for insisting on working. Capri doesn’t deserve this bum she calls a husband. Sad the girl died. I feel like Timmy is still alive and Capone and them are cautious enough. Goes around making enemies and not ensuring his fam is safe fr.

Okay book 2. Hopefully will be just as good. So far it’s just meeh. Erin and Capone relationship is toxic. Timmy bring his son complicates things in my opinion cause Erin hates him and Capri hates Tasha and Ella is bffs with Tasha. Lmao a mess. Oh and Nahiem is messing with Tasha 💀
If Erin knew what was good for her, she’d leave cause she has the least to lose out of everyone here.

Uum okay. We have hit a slight decline. It’s going down but still salvageable. First he needs to stop with the constant gorgeous. It’s cringe. Second I don’t like how the brother issue was handled. This girls emotions weren’t properly handled. I think obv she was always gonna help with the baby but the disrespect and attitude towards her hasn’t been addressed. They let him go easy. I dont like that.

Chapter 10.
Haven’t slept since yesterday it’s now 6am.
Erin my girl…idk how imma get you out of this situation.

Men are dogs.
Over here playing house but even after this wholesome family time he still insists on catching Erin’s bus and disrupting her little life. This will do nothing but add more drama in her poor (literally) life. Leave her alone man 😭

I’m having a good time so far. The chemistry between Erin and the two guys is noted. Esp cause you can tell the difference.

Don’t mess this up. Don’t pmo

I’m annoyed I’m only writing about this now. Been reading for like three days now. So far I like it. It’s a continuation of the previous book which I loved. Only thing here though is I don’t like how Wilhelmina is being described. It makes me uncomfortable. The big and strong and black girlness pf it all doesn’t feel nice. Very uncomfortable the way she’s physically described.

Her parents are enablers. I watched the movie and it’s not like this. We’ve only just started and she’s already cheating lol. Wth more is there go say for the rest of the book?

Wow that’s a really good prologue. Well written. Interesting and emotional. I really hope the book keeps this up. The standard has been set and my attention grabbed. Hope this doesn’t disappoint.

I don’t know how. I don’t know why. But this book just took a very SHARP turn and I hate it. This chapter is showing the immaturity of the writer. Moving in was one thing but the I love you and Angela having a panick attack epiphany just came out of nowhere and I feel like I missed so many chapters. The pace was going so well but now. This is shit. Like what happened. Is it a different writer?

Johnny is either the biggest lover boy simp out there or a dark twisted individual. Don’t know if this is good or bad. But why is he so forward.
Maybe I’m the problem

I may be giving this book complexities and depth. Sigh
Would have been such a good but obvious plot twist

Okay first, finally she revealed what kind of killer she is. She’s a vigilante. Okay cool.
I still don’t know if she has skills to fight and stuff but so far she just seems like a regular girl.
Second and most important why I’m making this update. What if Johnny is an opp?? Like what if Johnny has been scheming against her for whatever reason. Where police business or another begrudged criminal….

Two chapters down and I’m not made at it. It’s not perfect. The story is a bit flat here and there but for the most part I’m not mad. I still don’t know what she looks like or if she’s a serial killer or just a vigilante who kills bad people. She does give psycho vibes. But we’ll see. Hopefully it gets better. I am liking the romance between her and Johnny so far.

Racist old pedophile. Disgusting man. You know for a second I thought the man was chasing them to fix things and give them their money. A misunderstanding. People are cruel. Old white American farmers are never beating the allegations. These kids just responded to an ad YOU made. But maybe that’s how he lures his victims. Keep having a panic attack when I think of his vibe towards Maybeth💔

That last part was wholesome. In the movie the kids barely stay with Cousin Eunice for two days but here they were there for weeks. I’m glad cause we see they tried. I love that all this time James was the happy one but because hes so smart he figured Dicey was leaving and so they stopped her lol. So cute how it turned out regardless of happiness he will always pick his sisters and brother. Also showing sacrifice.