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MJ
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There’s a lot of repetitiveness so far. Like details being told to be two or three times in the perspective of different characters. It’s dragging along a bit.
— Jan 28, 2026 08:03AM
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MJ
is on page 167 of 324
This one is kind of a drop off from the last two books so far. But I think it’s because it’s been a while since I was in this “work” and also I hate anxiety. I have a lot of it. Tense or suspense makes me anxious.
— Jan 30, 2026 01:18PM
MJ
is on page 115 of 324
The level of cringe has been massively increased in this third book. Omds lol. It’s like characters are robotic. I still like the story but yeah. It’s just something cringy about their movements and actions
— Jan 29, 2026 01:11AM
