i keep pausing throughout this book because as soon as i become somewhat immersed in a scene – a sentence, something a character said, a reaction, etc. that feels out of place just rips me back out and I have to trudge through it.
Bellamy and Koraine need to have a more in depth argument. I need to see some angry quips back and forth between them.
— Dec 30, 2024 11:08AM
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