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Minor typo on page 125. Should be though and not thought.

So far so good. I feel like it's too early for a possible love connection to be happening but that's just me. The story is flowing smoothly and I'm just sucked in. Very interested to see the direction of where this book goes.

I don't usually make any assumptions/predictions while reading books. I feel like it ruins the book if it's something that doesn't go the way you expected. I was beyond surprised and shocked how the 70 pages I read unfolded. Can't wait to see how it ends!

What a twist! I was not expecting it on page 328. Things just got super interesting aside from the monsters and those developments. I'm really loving the plot overall. Can't wait to see where the last 100 pages ish goes.

I love a story that has an underdog element to it or where there's greater adversity in it. I love to see the character development due to these challenges and the impact they have and what that character becomes. I'm loving this book very much so far.

It's been a while since I've read a Cassandra Vlare book. I've forgotten how good her writing is.

Chapter 15 - why not have the whole chapter in regular font and thoughts italisized? Also, why is the first sentence of every chapter in caps?

Chapter 13 - the whole chapter is italisized except for one portion of a sentence. Even if it was a flashback, it could have been italisized. I feel like the fonts are being misused.

Dont think they did a thorough read before publishing. Sentence structure error on page 93. 'Kneeling down to the inspect the dust covered shelves'

Not bad overall this far