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The wordiness and vivid emotions remind me a ton of banville. Slow and mild just like real life. Sometimes you get caught in emotions and can’t get out. Wonderful read so far.

Woah

Whatever brah

One of the best books I’ve ever read.

WOW

This dude would be snap score stalker

Histories greatest simp! Doesn’t seem too tragic yet, I can only imagine what is going to happen next to poor werther. Can’t love a girl with a boyfriend. Only brings pain lil bro. Move on before you get yourself hurt 💔

You can tell when he learns new words because he uses them like 3-4 times per chapter and never again.

Interesting…I’m starting to notice some peculiar connections between H.H “spirit of 63rd” Holmes and King Von🤔🤔🤔🤔hear me out

Getting good!! Definitely two separate stories that don’t really have much connection, but they’re both interesting.

Some clunky writing, but still pretty good!

Trying my best to gaf

“Let’s start a dialogue” in novel form.
This is trying to say something. I can tell it’s being critical of this life style, but it’s pretty poorly done and weak.

This is kinda dull. Tells a story that everyone understands. Isn’t that deep but it clouds itself in big words, art, and other aesthetics to try and woo the reader. Funny how every time they introduce a new character I just KNOW they’re white.

Not sure I like this at all. Everyone knows an Anna and Tom, and they suck. Shallow people filling their lives with aesthetics so that they seem interesting. “Yeah we just moved to Berlin, it’s beautiful there. You should definitely visit”. No bro not everyone has a trust fund.

Very preachy, but has nothing to say I fear. Maybe it will get better, maybe they’ll realize that they sound dumb?

Interesting. Not sure I’m loving this so far, but it’s fun.

Wow

Bro likes his girls stinkyyyyyy😛

This feels like having a conversation with a really really smart old man. Tell me stories old man. Keep going. Another!