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Getting good!! Definitely two separate stories that don’t really have much connection, but they’re both interesting.

Some clunky writing, but still pretty good!

Trying my best to gaf

“Let’s start a dialogue” in novel form.
This is trying to say something. I can tell it’s being critical of this life style, but it’s pretty poorly done and weak.

This is kinda dull. Tells a story that everyone understands. Isn’t that deep but it clouds itself in big words, art, and other aesthetics to try and woo the reader. Funny how every time they introduce a new character I just KNOW they’re white.

Not sure I like this at all. Everyone knows an Anna and Tom, and they suck. Shallow people filling their lives with aesthetics so that they seem interesting. “Yeah we just moved to Berlin, it’s beautiful there. You should definitely visit”. No bro not everyone has a trust fund.

Very preachy, but has nothing to say I fear. Maybe it will get better, maybe they’ll realize that they sound dumb?

Interesting. Not sure I’m loving this so far, but it’s fun.

Wow

Bro likes his girls stinkyyyyyy😛

This feels like having a conversation with a really really smart old man. Tell me stories old man. Keep going. Another!

Bro is freaked upppppppp

This dude writes like a psychopath

This is well written, but I’m not gonna lie I do not care for any of these people yet.

Eileen better simmer down and realize how good she’s got it…

This is wonderful so far! Totally deserved all the hype

I feel like his character went from pretty thoughtless and uninspired to very opinionated really quickly? Like it totally makes sense but the start of the book you just don’t see him think or talk that way and then boom he’s the woker

Dawg is this smut????? What’s going on

Pretty good so far, but definitely not blowing me away.

This feels like a manic episode. I really like it though. Books without form are so interesting to me. You can see and feel all that she is describing but she doesn’t really use descriptors? The art of language.

Wow!! This is so beautifully written.

FUCK ANNE, FUCK CLIVE IDC. If I was Maurice I woulda done some crazy shit.