Jake Sudol’s Reviews > Perfection > Status Update

“Let’s start a dialogue” in novel form.
This is trying to say something. I can tell it’s being critical of this life style, but it’s pretty poorly done and weak.

This is kinda dull. Tells a story that everyone understands. Isn’t that deep but it clouds itself in big words, art, and other aesthetics to try and woo the reader. Funny how every time they introduce a new character I just KNOW they’re white.

Not sure I like this at all. Everyone knows an Anna and Tom, and they suck. Shallow people filling their lives with aesthetics so that they seem interesting. “Yeah we just moved to Berlin, it’s beautiful there. You should definitely visit”. No bro not everyone has a trust fund.

Very preachy, but has nothing to say I fear. Maybe it will get better, maybe they’ll realize that they sound dumb?