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Moving to StoryGraph and not using this anymore. Little changes count.

This book is beautifully written.

Also, I’m unbelievably bored.

Ok so it’s def getting better. The incessant internal dialogue of questions from the FMC has finally slowed. The plot has interested me from the beginning but I kept getting taken out by the writing style and the dialogue.

It’s getting better. That being said it’s soooo obvious to be from like the 1st 1/4 who The Guardian really is.

It’s fine…
I wish I liked this more.

Unpopular opinion it seems…but her inner dialogue being CONSTANT questions is annoying me. It seems like such a lazy way of writing to just have her listing question after question to herself CONSTANTLY. Also, it’s 1/3 of the way in and for the 4th time the ‘anyone else to pester?’ from Odessa and ‘not today.’ from the Guardian is repetitive as hell.

OMG

If something happens to Sorae I’ll riot.

Story feels back on track thank GOD. Still HATE the not telling her you’re dying to protect her bit. 🙄

Holding out hope but this book is getting a little repetitive and showing vs telling way more than I care for and way more than the first two books.

Also, secrets amongst friends and miscommunication trope in the 3rd book!? :(

I fear this book isn’t keeping the momentum of the first two. Also, my issues about it being repetitive make me nervous as I’m 1/3 in and this is way longer than the 1st two.