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Protagonist: The appearance is that he is going to not that poor and rich into the NBA. The feeling getting drafted is crazy for Lebron because he has put in this hard work and his mother took time away from her life and helped Lebron getting him game to game.

Antagonist: The author tells about Lebron James life and how he got to the NBA . The author put a timeline of Lebron James stuff in the back of the book. The author needs to add the stuff he broke in the 10 years. Like Lebron James broke the All Time Leading Scorer. Lebron now has more then 50,000 points. The 2nd place all time score was Kareem Abdul Jabber ( Lakers and Bucks Center.)

Visualize: It tells about LeBron James when he was young to where he is right now. When I read my book I feel like I can see what LeBron is doing and I understand what he is going through and see his time line.I always remember when LeBron was drafted that's is crazy cause LeBron comes through a hard life and challenges through his childhood. Another scene is when he broke a lot of records in the NBA.

Characterization: Papi feels happy he is so excited because he made it to the Little League Finals. Papi does baseball. He has been playing baseball every since he was 3 years old. Papi is a very serious baseball player, he tells everybody what to do, and helps the players do better. Papi thinks that he wants to be the best player in little League player ever to play little League. Papi tries every hard every day.

Types of Conflict: The Game Seven Conflict is they had to go through hard challenges to go to the World Series because they have the go through good team. They almost lost in the Game seven they were down by 1 in the 9th inning then the best player came and hit a Grand Slam and then they won the World Series. They wanted to win another World Series because nobody never won back to back. They wanted to be the first.

SETTING: The setting of my book is a baseball field. The boy is trying to make the World Series. The setting is also a house that the person lives in. He does baseball after school until night he trains with his baseball team. He sometimes skip school because he has a baseball game which is crazy cause of a baseball game. His parents wants him to make it to the Major League Baseball and go pro.

Inciting Incident: The narrative event is that Gabe wants to make it to the Word Series with his baseball team. Gabe and his team works so hard to make it. They make it to the World Series. The World Series is supposed to be on Tuesday but it is raining on Tuesday. The game got cancelled for 2 days. another day. Gabes dad is upset because he is busy on Thursday so he can't go, watch his son play, in the World Series.

Story Archetypes: The Quest and Comedy. They are a baseball team and they are trying to win the series. They have to go against good teams and bad teams. They almost lost the a game in the playoffs. They almost lost so many times So far they are 1 win away from winning the Series. On the team they are not that much good people one person is doing very good. He is working hard for the series his coach said.

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Visualize: In my head I think what is going on to her because she goes stuff that is crazy. My feelings are like sometimes my heart drops and i'm like what is she doing. " I first wake up and the hazy light filters through my blinds,striping my white blanket like there were bars on my window." I sometimes see the sun coming through my blinds and waking me up. I visualize me in my bed waking up to the sun.

Making Connections: When she went to the doctors she fine. When she went outside this boy started following back home. She left the doctor a note that said " Please watch the camera look in the entrances of the hospital and see how is following her. When I read that i'm like how does she know that someone was going to follow her back? I heard that my friend went somewhere and someone followed him back home.

The characters are this girl The girl is still in school she is about to go to high school . She goes with her friends to haunted house and a ghost followers her back and haunted her. She doesn't know that is a ghost. The ghost doesn't follow her friends back.

My character wants to a normal girl. They are ghost following her. The ghost doesn't want to heave her alone. She went to a haunted house and then a ghost went back with her to her house and it is haunting her every since.

I have many questions about my book. Why did she go to the haunted house. Why did she go into a random persons house. Why did she get hurt in the haunted house.

My character is Static. I know this because this because she never changed and always stays the same. It seems like she is not going to change but you never know. She has the same act as she did from the beginning of the books. She has her drama like she had in the beginning of the book.

The conflict is that Character and self. The Character goes to a haunted house and a ghost follows her back to her house. It haunts her and mess with her.

I think that she goes to a haunted house and the ghost will follow her back to her house I know that because it says that someone or something followed her back to her house.

Her appearance is at school and at home and she is going to haunted places. Her language is that she is explaining other stuff. She is scared that she is going to a haunted house

My point of view is 1st person because it just talked about the person in the story. It doesn't say you and I. I know because it only talks about the person that's having a bad day.