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Action packed from the jump, love the narration style. Immediate lovable characters.

SPOT IS SUCH A GOOD BOY OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just past the halfway mark - I’m really enjoying the tangle of the plot so far - between Kairos and Eris’s personal problems and the fight between the Gods it makes for such an entertaining read. For a debut novel, this slaps!

First of all - the description of honey dripping scratched something animalistic in my brain. I am a little confused where the story will go but invested to find out. The writing and prose is so eloquent and beautiful.

I feel like this is going to be a painfully relatable read from the standpoint of parenthood. I love how colorful the characters are so far, they feel so real already.

Action packed so far. The banter and world building are great and I like that the author gives a lot of the world building details through conversations between Eris and Kairos. I do wish there was a little more tension/build up to the action but I like the arc that Kairos is on. I feel like the author is doing a great job illustrating mental health issues sensitively here as well. The dog (Spot) remains GOATed.

The prose could use some work but so far I am really loving the world building and the relationship and banter between Eris and Kairos, I think this is going to be a very very good read, can’t wait to read more tonight!

If the dog dies I’ll be so livid