Oke the goods: the spice is decent 🌶️🌶️… and that’s kinda where it ends. His age doesn’t really make sense especially with his back story, there’s an incredible amount of back tracking which is super annoying (I don’t mind back tracking if seeing it from a different perspective actually enhances the experience for the reader) I’m also missing some character development tbh… seems kinda blank
— Dec 13, 2025 06:12PM
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