“‘You missed.’ He doesn’t even flinch.
‘Did I?’ I reach ‘Why don’t you back up a couple of steps and test that theory?’
[…]
His back hits the tree, and the hilts of my daggers brush his ears.”
I had to read this segment 5 times to understand why it was supposed to be significant. Wouldn’t he have heard the daggers flying past his ears? Felt the breeze? Why does he need to back up?
— Oct 18, 2023 03:43PM
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