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This is freaking funny. I’ve been reading it to my teenagers, but have to keep going back again and again as a new family member joins in. And the great thing is, I really don’t mind!

Gag. The pet names…eugh

25% through and she just referred to her chest as “funbags”. I’m not sold on that one.
Also, what does it say when I trust a dog’s instincts more than any other main character so far?

Omgosh. Not even at the first chapter and I am laughing!

It’s getting interesting again but I still have to ignore aspect to enjoy. But the pace has really picked up and if there’s one thing (there’s obviously more) this author does well is immerse a reader into every tense situation until I am holding my breath.

Jeez, I’m about ready to give up on this tale.
My biggest annoyance is that everyone is making plot after plot but sometimes ignoring the most obvious answer.
I don’t know why there is no military in this country. Where are the militias?! If you have none, you are open to anything. Why isn’t that a discussion?
I get sick of sable being manipulated so easily, and then making major decisions without all facts.

What a drag so far. I’m at the point where I feel I’ve been reading for 3 days, they talk in circles, they say one thing and do another, get incandescent with rage and then quiet and meek the next. I’m not sure how much longer i’ll read for

Ugh. They were pretty useless in that end fight. And so slow to put the pieces together. There was no finesse. No cunning to overcome their obstacles. Literally just hack and smash. Then the opposition hacked and smashed more. Then we did a last hurrah hack and smash. And then they return volleyed and ended on top. Oh no, wait. One more show of brute strength and numbers by a surprise team from our side, now we won

The simplicity of the plot and of the romance between main characters is starting to get to me.
It’s too basic, ya feel me? And her relationships with each man seems to skip several steps from beginning to love without enough work going into it.