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Dnf

Dnfd- not great, simplitisc and awkward present first person narration

Very clear potter fanfic- names are a giveaway.

If the names had been changed it would have been much better, less of a slap in the face and less grating.

But 25 yo teacher kissing 17 yo student....ugh, no. That’s creepy. Could have made him a hot TA and her 18/college level and it would be smexy but not creeper level

Loving it!

Long- and no plot to speak of, just your average perfect girl who everyone loves making money being cute and kicking ass while also kinda helpless. It was like a wish fulfillment good dream. Not bad technical writing, per se, but not disciplined and it felt like it needed a really tough editor who would ask- what is the story.

Up to 47% not terrible but not unique or particularly well written: however i dnf’d this with prejudice once there is a foiled escape plan punished with spanking. It aint sexy, its just patronizing abuse. Nope nope nope. Bullshit.

Flower pedal...pedals in the breeze....ugh. About six times, i was confused at first, then annoyed.

How did i not realize the MC has my name? I fomt think i can read this. Its weird reading about myself.

Plot could be interesting but it needs serious editing for content and grammar. It was confusing and kept losing my attention.