So, after the 33% mark, it does pick up to get less "in MC's head" and becomes more like real conversations. Although, I keep wondering if it is really necessary to mention all these pop culture and other references. Letting the characters speak for themselves, preferably in a dual POV setting (wish this book were dual pov) rather than only always telling us their weird thoughts would have been much more enjoyable
— Feb 05, 2024 01:48AM
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