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I'm having a very difficult time getting through this book! I don't really care for the heroine. She's way to meek for me and it's very hard for me to understand way every male that is near her wants her.

I'm having a very hard time keeping with this book. It reads to me like high school drama

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Example #2 (bad guys getting away) "Tires squealing, the car sped down the one-way street, ignored the stop sign, and careened around the corner" Hmmmm, again just why?!? Why would a getaway car/driver STOP for a stop sign? We need to know he was trying to get away so quickly that he actually blew threw a stop sign.....the horror!

Liking book but I'm having trouble with how detailed the author gets at times. It's so ridiculous that it pulls me out of the story to think "Why???" Example - “He leaned back and stretched, the reclining desk chair supporting his weight, then scrubbed his hands through his hair. Why wouldn't the desk chair support his weight? Does he have crappy furniture? Does he have a weight issue? "

Really.....how many 17 year old use the phrase "hold on there tiger"?

A guy referring to something being "groady"....um, no, just no

Possibly the cheesiest line ever "that secret entrance deep between her thighs clenched like the mouth of a drawstring purse" I think I winced and gave a little shudder - NOT sexy.....

Wow, I think this is the longest sexual encounter I've read. I'm into it three chapters and they're still going strong... It's very well written and what impresses me is that it is not repetitive or boring as some writers can be when trying to draw out a scene like this. Back to the fun....