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A typo within a few sentences? Yikes.

How many times can a character say "wouldn't this be a bad book plot?" Or "this is real life, not a book!"

And how many times does the author need to mention what authors are like in real life, how hard authors work, authors authors authors.

20% in and there's been no less than 20 of these. Gag me.

The reviews are epic.... why is it so lame? I'm so bored. Reese is annoying.

How many times is she going to call a female a whore. At least 20 times in 60 pages. Yikes.

61% and still talking about plagiarism 3 times already. Anyone know wtf happened because she sure is projecting in to her story 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

While the authors writing is absolutely beautiful, this book could not be any less original in its plot. Young girl hates the system, has a best boy friend that comes from a family of wealth or power, boy is in love with girl, declares love before she goes off of the scary dystopian adventure of life or death
It has details and plot points that are INTERESTING but I cannot get over the box checking of standard plot.

Really?? REALLY??? Fucking ads throughout this book?! What an absolute dumpster thing to do. How annoying. If I wanted to see this shit I would watch TV. Dont interrupt my reading flow by making me skip your God damn ads.

Garbage tactics to "fill" your pages and throw in other people's books and links. Didya get paid to do this? Ugh.

15% does anything ever happen? So bored

40% still so bored

80% do I dnf or do I finish since I made it this far

Can I DNF yet? I've never DNFd an Ella Frank book...so weird.

10% and theres been like 4 touching, electrocuting zaps already.

If I roll my eyes anymore they're gonna fall outta my head.

Like, I know this has a bajillion amazing reviews. ...but Christ on toast, I feel like I've been reading forEVER and nothing has happened but her sitting in a library. For days. And days. And days. I am bored out of my fucking mind.

does scarlett get any less annoying? all i want is to flick her in the face. for this being an epic fantasy with adventure....she is the least adventurous or courageous heroine i have ever read. christ on toast.

re-listen #2 ♡♡♡♡

this is painfully juvenile. yowza.

10% Wait... why is this book based in the 1800s (it's a Western) and the people on the cover are wearing fucking blue jeans?!

I can't. hahahahaha

60% - WTF. What is with this language?! "I sure reckon I'm going to f*** your p****." It's like the worst mash up of wanna-be old school country slang and current cringe-worthy dirty talk.

Why am I reading this still? WHY.

Wait... why is this book based in the 1800s (it's a Western) and the people on the cover are wearing fucking blue jeans?!

I can't. hahahahaha

60% - WTF. What is with this language?! "I sure reckon I'm going to f*** your p****." It's like the worst mash up of wanna-be old school country slang and current cringe-worthy dirty talk.

Why am I reading this still? WHY.

Wait... why is this book based in the 1800s (it's a Western) and the people on the cover are wearing fucking blue jeans?!

I can't. hahahahaha

omg what a breath of fresh air. this bitch is hilarious.

just.... why? why.


no.

shit is JUST now getting interesting. i wish it started here and everything before this was thrown in the garbage.

Hey BL Brunnemer... you really need an editor. One more your/you're and a puppy dies.

Um. If one more character releases a breath they didn't know they were holding ONE MORE TIME I'm going to have to stop. Holy shit. WHyyyy. I've counted like EIGHT so far.

Also... why is the first half like this? It seriously could have been told in 2 chapters, not 200 pages. #BringViggoBACK

Shiiiiit. I just...I know nothing.

But that end?? Jesus.

Nooooooo. A man, a COWBOY, does not name his horse Freckles. Just... no! hahahaha #ForFucksSake

"Don't...don't dream about me, okay?" Shit. 5 am and I am literally crying over a character that isn't even a part of the story. hahaha.

Honest to God, I can't decide if I don't like this book...or I like it. *scratches head*

why is there so much crying?? Man tears just don't do it for me. And all the men are crying, all the damn time.

He shoves a gun in a man's mouth at lunch. I don't care who you are, that's hot as fuck.

Shit just got serious....finally! The first part was a wee bit slow and the whole love-at-first-chonies-sight at eleven gave me the eebies. But I have a feeling shit is about to go doooooown. Who is Cam and why is he tentative with her probably mobster Daddy?