Chloe Doerflein > Recent Status Updates

The story is getting very interesting and the characters are developing nicely. Although some stamens the author makes seem a little too much like a teenage girl.

The characters are becoming more developed, which is good, but the antagonist written almost like a 14 year old girl writing fan fiction would write him to be.

The boom and characters are developing more and getting better. The plot is moving more quickly now and the characters are undergoing a lot of development.

The story is still very interesting but the characters are still off. Airel seems to get upset over things like being called a child, but not about getting kidnapped.

The story is good although the character is still odds, as she reacts wildly to small things but doesn't stress about being kidnapped.

The story is getting more interesting but the main character is just odd. She literally watched a man get murdered and reacted like everything was chill.

The story is getting pretty interesting, but is still a bit cliche. It even used the term 'hashtag facepalm'. Which wasn't preferred. Although the story does contain interesting plot twists.

The book so far is okay. I like the story but it is rather cliche and predictable.

The book is okay so far. The only thing I do not enjoy about it is how casual the author is. It almost seems as if the story was written by a twelve year old. Although I do like how normal the main character is. She isn't overly powerful or beautiful, she is simply average.