Chloe Doerflein’s Reviews > Airel: The Discovering > Status Update

The story is getting very interesting and the characters are developing nicely. Although some stamens the author makes seem a little too much like a teenage girl.

The characters are becoming more developed, which is good, but the antagonist written almost like a 14 year old girl writing fan fiction would write him to be.

The story is still very interesting but the characters are still off. Airel seems to get upset over things like being called a child, but not about getting kidnapped.

The story is good although the character is still odds, as she reacts wildly to small things but doesn't stress about being kidnapped.