Chloe Doerflein’s Reviews > Airel: The Discovering > Status Update
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The characters are becoming more developed, which is good, but the antagonist written almost like a 14 year old girl writing fan fiction would write him to be.
— Mar 16, 2016 07:27AM
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The story is getting very interesting and the characters are developing nicely. Although some stamens the author makes seem a little too much like a teenage girl.
— Mar 30, 2016 07:54AM
Chloe Doerflein
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The boom and characters are developing more and getting better. The plot is moving more quickly now and the characters are undergoing a lot of development.
— Mar 02, 2016 07:51AM
Chloe Doerflein
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The story is still very interesting but the characters are still off. Airel seems to get upset over things like being called a child, but not about getting kidnapped.
— Feb 24, 2016 07:40AM
Chloe Doerflein
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The story is good although the character is still odds, as she reacts wildly to small things but doesn't stress about being kidnapped.
— Feb 17, 2016 07:53AM