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Still hate narration, but has provoked a lot of self reflection

Wow this narration is so bad.

Trying to be a romance novel but you never get to know the other characters well enough to feel a connection

“Morning came at me like a mugging”, “the kind of light you only saw in toothpaste ads”, “like a toothache in my frontal lobe “… and that’s just in a couple paragraphs

Very dramatic writing. The number of analogies is excessive and often overdone - I would have loved it when I was 20 but now the drama feels overdone

Crying within 5 minutes. Probably going to like this one.