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Ali
is 28% done
“Morning came at me like a mugging”, “the kind of light you only saw in toothpaste ads”, “like a toothache in my frontal lobe “… and that’s just in a couple paragraphs
— Sep 13, 2025 08:02AM
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Ali
is 77% done
Trying to be a romance novel but you never get to know the other characters well enough to feel a connection
— Sep 13, 2025 01:29PM
Ali
is 28% done
Very dramatic writing. The number of analogies is excessive and often overdone - I would have loved it when I was 20 but now the drama feels overdone
— Sep 13, 2025 07:59AM
