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its interesting to give juliette more of choice here and how that messes her brain, but were missing out on the actual tragedy of r&j where he does kill her cousin and she has to grapple w/ that. sure he’s already been killing her gang but she has too so it doesn’t hit as hard. idk i think maybe gong shouldntve marketed this as an r&j retelling just to force story beats that feel shoehorned in instead of natural

and then again we have the whole stuffing the turkey too much. this book feels like it’s going to explode with all the plot points the authors tried to shove into it. it’s lopsided. it’s not balanced. there’s too much going on, i’ve forgotten the real “plot” of why we’re all back together after the first book anyway. lady you cannot do it all, especially not like this.

you’ve basically overpowered one character and as a result, diminished the capabilities of the character we’re supposed to see as her equal? had roma taken the shot one way or another not only would it have held true to the original r&j story but it also would’ve maybe shown roma having an actual hand in this instead of it all just being on juliette. you’ve created your autonomous character but nerfed her L/I

aH such an odd choice here i cannot wrap my head around? like the author is trying to say juliette is one thing but her actions are way different. shes this public figure with all this power and yet we dont actually see how the public feels about her which i feel like is an important part of curating this narrative? what does having juliette shoot tyler do for the story you’re trying to tell??? i cant understand it

communism…. bad?? in fair verona, where we lay our scene…

whole lotta something and nothing going on at the same time…

i don’t know what a russian man in the 1920s is supposed to look like so i’m just picturing joey donner from ten things i hate about you

immediately better than the first. editor was in the here!! just maybe not in the room. maybe from a two way mirror.

back into it because i have the romeo and juliet brain bug

15 minute ethel cain song, mid sesh, this scene is soooo ella enchanted coded chloe gong i know #whatyouare

author doesn’t understand pov??? are we working with third person limited or omniscient??? why are we jumping back and forth

with bangs, i’m miss delicious?

i don’t even know if i would call this a romeo and juliet retelling outside of like a couple similar names and familiar scenes. which lowkey sucks because the parts i am enjoying are those that draw closer to r+j.

i like when she goes back to the r+j of it all. seems like the strongest part.

save me phoebe bridgers.. phoebe bridgers save me…. or i guess kill me is the song in listening to…

there’s a lot going on here

the writing here may also…not… be too.. good…?

i will get out of this reading slump one way or another so help me god and dolly parton

this might be a bad book…??? inconclusive, we still got like another 200 pages or something

bad news bears: they’re codependent and horny as fuck