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I know Dora being an annoying dumbshit is the point, but damn

The writing on this is pretty juvenile. Sometimes it feels like they sat down with a thesaurus and like ok every few pages change out a common word but do in the middle of an otherwise colloquial sentence

Idk how this is all going to bring all these women together. Right now it feels like she's just giving biographies of all the women even tangentially touched by the case at hand.

The writing on this is so extraordinarily mid. Like...high school level of writing. You started out writing shitty middle school fanfic but have moved on to slightly better written creepypasta.

This just isn't as good as the first one. I don't really care about Orok's issues. Alexo is a fun potentially interesting character but we don't really get to know him. This is more about Orok's own shit with an insta-love relationship thrown in, and not avout the development of their relationship at all.

Damn, 8 is kind of an asshole.

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