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Returning with promised quotes: Harvard described as "An artificially intelligent Eden: a warm, incubated landscape designed to keep the worst kids in America safe and warm and well-fed until they matured past the urge to peck each other's eyes out."
I'm gonna tell you right now - Ivy League schools aren't actually a measure of intelligence, usually. It's a measure of who you know and how much money you have.

Reminder to self to come back and quote this later

Ok, that code is goofy af

Fuck men, especially men with fragile egos and no self-awareness.

Immediately on pitch. I imagine there are some who won't get it, but they barely know how to read anyway. And they're too busy ruining the world.

First major complaint: that duel scene was poorly written. I believe Vis was attacking Ianix's Amotus but it was written that he was attacking Ianix himself - which a) is against the rules and b) doesn't make sense in the context of the end of the fight. So what is HIS Amotus doing? Unclear. I get what he was trying to depict but what he wrote uhhh doesn't depict that.

The tone of this is all over the place. Syd was just being chased from drug runners and almost rammed off the road, she's injured, and now she and her cousin are laughing about truck nuts in the parking lot.

Just started this and I think me and this dude would get along.

I wish we spent more time with Juan. His has been the most interesting POV. I also want to know wtf he was doing the entire part 3 when we were in Gaspar's head.