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Haruto's mom being the only one making smart decisions

The good news is, Nazi's are/will burn in whatever version of hell exists

This woman has a film-only understanding of how childbirth works. LABOR DOES NOT INSTANTLY LEAD TO BIRTH MA'AM

I'm sorry, are you trying to tell me, right now, unto my face, that the Titanic crashed because ONE dude left his binoculars locked up? They had no other binoculars on board? Is that what you're trying to tell me? That the binoculars were locked up and the key to your own PERSONAL set came with the job? What the actual fuck.

So time doesn't matter to the Shiikuin but Hana and Kei can "give themselves time" by confusing them? I know this is a fairly common plot device but it doesn't really work if you make the foe seem omniscient and omnipotent.

The pacing on this is off. It's not great.

Feels weird that she's just casually having a drink with her alcoholic, abusive ex but also feels right?

Battered woman syndrome I guess? Seems very stupid to protect your abuser when there are other women coming forward. Even if you DID fight back. Who gives a fuck.

Sometimes a really good grandma character is just what you need to brighten your day

Mostly this is not bad, but the writing is a little clunky. Also, it's very dumb that she has Keishin, who has been presumably speaking Japanese this whole time, ask if he pronounced the word "Hana" correctly. Bitch, what?

On top of everything else, the dog gets hit by a car and dies and I'm not over it many pages later. If this happened to my dog, the rage and heart break would probably kill me.

Also, how can she be awarded the house and he refuse to hand over the deed? Can't the courts force him? That's insane.