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Summerfire
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So time doesn't matter to the Shiikuin but Hana and Kei can "give themselves time" by confusing them? I know this is a fairly common plot device but it doesn't really work if you make the foe seem omniscient and omnipotent.
— Nov 08, 2025 07:37AM
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Summerfire
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This woman has a film-only understanding of how childbirth works. LABOR DOES NOT INSTANTLY LEAD TO BIRTH MA'AM
— Nov 09, 2025 02:29PM
Summerfire
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I'm sorry, are you trying to tell me, right now, unto my face, that the Titanic crashed because ONE dude left his binoculars locked up? They had no other binoculars on board? Is that what you're trying to tell me? That the binoculars were locked up and the key to your own PERSONAL set came with the job? What the actual fuck.
— Nov 08, 2025 10:56AM
Summerfire
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Mostly this is not bad, but the writing is a little clunky. Also, it's very dumb that she has Keishin, who has been presumably speaking Japanese this whole time, ask if he pronounced the word "Hana" correctly. Bitch, what?
— Nov 02, 2025 08:49AM
