You know what it is that bothers me. Its when scenarios happen that feel made up for a purpose. Of course as a writer we do this, but when you can tell when you read the book... It takes away from my ability to immerse myself in the world. When in quick succession multiple people say and do things that feel unlikely or off, but it builds character... It ticks me off. It doesn't feel smooth. It feels fake &unrealistic
— Dec 15, 2023 06:41PM
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