the pacing in this is so odd....nothing feels bloated but I'm at page 368 out of 448 and very little has happened outside of asphodel's timeline ..... in fact much of this present timeline has been catching lilianne up on the situation and thus reminding the reader what the previous books were about. but the writing is sufficiently enjoyable that it doesn't come off as slow or boring? i don't know .....
— Jul 30, 2026 03:33PM
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