…. The excessive description is wearing me down somewhat. It’s not adding to the story, or the pace, all it is doing is frustrating the reader. I love an adjective, an adverb and a fronted adverbial phrase, but even a literary nerd 🤓 like me has her limits. Read on…. Slowly? Carefully? Mercifully? Dangerously? Insidiously? ..:: catch my drift 🤣
— Oct 07, 2025 12:07AM
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