Tee Dielesen’s Reviews > The Fallen & the Kiss of Dusk > Status Update
Tee Dielesen
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Well the last one ended well, so let’s keep the momentum going. This is the tale of how the fallen ascend.. read on!
— Oct 06, 2025 11:01PM
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Tee Dielesen
is on page 329 of 557
Oh… so now it’s peaceful and quiet and pleasant!
— Oct 07, 2025 11:28PM
Tee Dielesen
is on page 206 of 557
…. The drilling next door has ruined my holiday peace ✌️… so I’m trying to escape back to Nyaxia. Between the excessive noise and the excessive description, alls I can say is, my word! Amidst the chaos and the blather, Read on! 😵💫😵💫😵💫
— Oct 07, 2025 09:38PM
Tee Dielesen
is on page 40 of 557
…. The excessive description is wearing me down somewhat. It’s not adding to the story, or the pace, all it is doing is frustrating the reader. I love an adjective, an adverb and a fronted adverbial phrase, but even a literary nerd 🤓 like me has her limits. Read on…. Slowly? Carefully? Mercifully? Dangerously? Insidiously? ..:: catch my drift 🤣
— Oct 07, 2025 12:07AM
