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I am struggling with this book. I may tame a break and then come back later.

Started skipping around and spoiled something for myself, whatever

So many random typos

These positions do not make sense

What do you mean SCRATCHY?!

There seem to be tiny continuity errors that keep throwing me out of the book, but meh

I love this FMC and her convictions

I remember loving this book but I’ll be damned if I can recall details

Weird that I’m almost the same age as Aunt Julia

I’m enjoying this, even if it is taking me forever

God I love a big, hopeless lunk.

Reread time! Not audio this time

Three quarters of the book was Before. Yikes.

137 pages and the light bulb has finally turned on for this man

Oh wow, lots of POV

Ok, I like these two characters, and I am enjoying my time with them, but knowing that they get married and that their marriage is in trouble, THAT’s the part I want! Get me out of this flashback/prologue/whatever

I am really enjoying the way this is written (voice?)

Ok, I understand why he isn’t looking for a relationship (typical MMC reasons), but what’s her hang up?

Why in the world is the word “fuck” censored?!

This seems professional

Whoa whoa whoa, why are there THREE names on the chapter list?! Is this a MFM? MMF?

His office? Hockey players have offices?

You do not get a ring indent in two days, cmon

How can she tell he’s smirking when her eyes are closed? So far, I’m ok with the decision to just start here and not read the others…

Hoyt is really good at putting down red herrings. At least I assume they’re red herrings… I guess we’ll see.

Well there’s the problem

This is ABSOLUTELY going on the “too sweet” shelf. This FMC is a problem

I need to get a little further, but this might qualify for the “too sweet” shelf

I could have sworn this scene was in The Long Game

Should have had more faith in Nalini