Constantine Siouris’s Reviews > The Candymakers and the Great Chocolate Chase > Status Update

CHARACTERIZATION: In my book Logan feels many different emotions. In the past, Logan got burned very badly and has burn marks all over him now. He doesn't let that bother him and he still tries his best to do everything. He is super kind to everyone he meets and has made many connections. He has made connections with people like the workers in the factory. He always tries to do his best in creating things like candy.

The inciting incident in my book is when Logan was entered into the competition of a bunch of kid candymakers. He was old enough to compete in the competition like his dad and his grandfather. He has a lot of pressure on winning because everyone in his family has won it. So, the inciting incident in my book is when Logan had a compete in the Candymakers contest and try to win it all.

In my book I can visualize some taste of candy. When Logan went inside of the Marshmallow Room, he ate a golden gooey marshmallow. I can visualize this of me at a campfire with a marshmallow on a stick. Then I can eat it or make it into a s'more. For this to happen I read that Logan wanted to have a sweet snack and he had a marshmallow. I made the connection and visualized me tasting and eating it.