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Zac is 40% done
Violet anytime an officer in her chain of command gives her orders:
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Feb 03, 2025 12:29PM
Onyx Storm (The Empyrean, #3)

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Zac
Zac is 85% done
Genuinely great turn of the plot rn, but we have 15% left, so let's if this holds
Feb 22, 2025 11:00PM
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Zac
Zac is 75% done
Violet - "There's no such thing as [insert plot convenience] power"

Xaden- "Actually there is, but it's been super secret up till now, and you're the only one in the last few centuries that has had this [plot convenience] power"

Violet - "Wow, that's crazy, let's never mention this super secret and powerful power [presumably] ever again cause the author has no need for it anymore"

Xaden - "Yes". SHES DONE IT AGAIN
Feb 22, 2025 05:35PM
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Zac
Zac is 68% done
-I'm taking this too seriously?Need I remind you this book is 544 pages?That is a long book, so after editing, Yarros said "no this is essential to my book".If she wants me to pay the same, if not more money for this book as I have paid for books that lifted my heart with joy, then I will treat this book to the same standard. How about you stop reminding me about better books and actually commit to a charachter arc
Feb 16, 2025 02:38AM
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Zac
Zac is 67% done
...with such a UNIQUE NAME??? "hmm what should a call my rip-off of spice from Dune for my new book onyx storm? Aw well, my main charachter is called violet, and violet is a shade of purple! Haha! I'm so smart and clever". NO, ITS STUPID AND DUMB. YOU DID NOT HAVE TO DO THIS

some people would say this is an homage, and to them I say you're wrong. This book has NO cross over with Dune. And to those that say...
Feb 16, 2025 02:32AM
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Zac
Zac is 66% done
...that she'd forget what inspiration meant and just reduce one of the most whacky and bonkers but developed out features of Dune, to what is entirely an aesthetic. Like, literally just changed names "it's a mineral called violodrite" and it makes their eyes turn purple from excessive use. They have it on EVERYTHING on the isle. VIOLEDRITE???? ARE YOU KIDDING ME??? how could she have possibly come up...
Feb 16, 2025 02:30AM
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Zac
Zac is 65% done
Onyx storm ripping off the spice melange from dune was not in my bingo card.

Yarros wants Frank Herbert's nachos so bad.

I BET you, she was writing this section for the wisdom island, and had no clue how to distinguish it, so decided to go to the movies to try and get some inspiration.

But when she rocked up and presumably saw Dune Part 1 or 2, she just forgot what inspiration meant and decided...SEE NeXT POST
Feb 16, 2025 02:26AM
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Zac
Zac is 60% done
NOT A SPOILER BUT KINDA SEMI/ CONTAINS SMALL STORY ELEMENTS/////

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This silver hair thing is not the read yarros thinks it is
Feb 11, 2025 01:25PM
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Zac
Zac is 50% done
Xaden just needs to drink a monster a stfu
Feb 09, 2025 03:15AM
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Zac
Zac is 10% done
UPDATE: We're so on.
Jan 25, 2025 10:40PM
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