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Teah
is 70% done
Okay, it's going downhill.
What I liked about the first book is that it avoided a lot of the 'Annoying Characters' that litter YA/NA books.
That's gone now.
A lot of plot devices are a bit TOO convenient (which is saying something) and basically ALL the riders have been sniffing their own farts and declare it to be roses.
I just really want a gryphon to kick a dragon's ass but I know it's not going to happen
— Feb 10, 2025 11:05AM
What I liked about the first book is that it avoided a lot of the 'Annoying Characters' that litter YA/NA books.
That's gone now.
A lot of plot devices are a bit TOO convenient (which is saying something) and basically ALL the riders have been sniffing their own farts and declare it to be roses.
I just really want a gryphon to kick a dragon's ass but I know it's not going to happen
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Teah
is 75% done
OH, yeah, this is definitely taking a downward turn.
Taking out this whole Cat plot point would have made this book 50% better. Checking the egos at the door would do it another 25%.
It really doesn't take much to suck the enjoyment out of something.
— Feb 12, 2025 04:04PM
Taking out this whole Cat plot point would have made this book 50% better. Checking the egos at the door would do it another 25%.
It really doesn't take much to suck the enjoyment out of something.
