Elisha’s Reviews > Deadbeat > Status Update
Elisha
is 54% done
First off, I do like how the main character Peyton is a relatable guy. He's not perfect by any means, but he's at least trying to better himself.
Second, This doesn't feel as fast paced as the summary is making it out to be. Either I'm missing something or this needed some more editing because this kind of feels like a slog so far.
— Feb 12, 2025 10:19AM
Second, This doesn't feel as fast paced as the summary is making it out to be. Either I'm missing something or this needed some more editing because this kind of feels like a slog so far.
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