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Ailish
is on page 310 of 758
PLEASE not the ‘xaden and me’ again, PLEASE if you’re a book editor you should know that isn’t right. i learnt this when i was six i’m begging you
— Feb 12, 2025 11:46AM
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Ailish
is on page 647 of 758
NOTHING THAT HAS HAPPENED IN THIS BOOK HAS BEEN A CONSEQUENCE OF CHARACTER ACTIONS??? LITERALLY EVERY MAIN PLOT POINT IS JUST SOMETHING THAT CONVENIENTLY HAPPENS TO THEM
— Feb 20, 2025 12:06PM
Ailish
is on page 647 of 758
NOTHING THAT HAS HAPPENED IN THIS BOOK HAS BEEN A CONSEQUENCE OF CHARACTER ACTIONS??? LITERALLY EVERY MAIN PLOT POINT IS JUST SOMETHING THAT CONVENIENTLY HAPPENS TO THEM
— Feb 20, 2025 12:06PM
Ailish
is on page 456 of 758
why didn’t you notice that before?? sitting at the same table??
— Feb 17, 2025 10:53AM
Ailish
is on page 296 of 758
i am so so so so so fucking bored, i’ve been reading this for weeks and the end plot twist to the last book STILL doesn’t feel resolved. this has just felt like the same shit over and over again, “we need to go find these two things!” OKAY SO GO FUCKING DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT????
ALSO THERE ARE TWO GRAMMAR ERRORS ON THIS PAGE ALONE. are you fucking serious rn
— Feb 12, 2025 10:55AM
ALSO THERE ARE TWO GRAMMAR ERRORS ON THIS PAGE ALONE. are you fucking serious rn
