Ailish’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update

NOTHING THAT HAS HAPPENED IN THIS BOOK HAS BEEN A CONSEQUENCE OF CHARACTER ACTIONS??? LITERALLY EVERY MAIN PLOT POINT IS JUST SOMETHING THAT CONVENIENTLY HAPPENS TO THEM

why didn’t you notice that before?? sitting at the same table??

PLEASE not the ‘xaden and me’ again, PLEASE if you’re a book editor you should know that isn’t right. i learnt this when i was six i’m begging you

i am so so so so so fucking bored, i’ve been reading this for weeks and the end plot twist to the last book STILL doesn’t feel resolved. this has just felt like the same shit over and over again, “we need to go find these two things!” OKAY SO GO FUCKING DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT????
ALSO THERE ARE TWO GRAMMAR ERRORS ON THIS PAGE ALONE. are you fucking serious rn