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Ala
is 3% done
this book (or I guess the writing style) feels like I'm reading some crazy person's word vomit. like a person's stream of consciousness spilled on a page. things just happen to the characters, and some sentences have no subject. it kinda makes me feel crazy too.... I'm not sure if I hate it or like it
— Feb 18, 2025 05:08PM
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Ala
is 82% done
it is ROUGH. I'm trying my absolute bestest to get through this and even though I only have less than 100 ebook pages, I'm STRUGGLING. I am kinda invested in the story so I will finish it, but I really just want it to be over. it's not terrible, it's just meh and I wanna move on already (after like a 3 month break)
— Jun 22, 2025 10:53PM
Ala
is 67% done
I'm still enjoying this book (pretty sure) but I'm not gonna lie, it feels like it hit a plateau...
like I understand that there's things to solve and decisions to make and conversations to have, but it just feels like the character have done some growth in the beginning a little bit and now we're just witnessing their lives as it's happening...
like that's ok but starting to get a tiny bit boring..
— Feb 25, 2025 11:52AM
like I understand that there's things to solve and decisions to make and conversations to have, but it just feels like the character have done some growth in the beginning a little bit and now we're just witnessing their lives as it's happening...
like that's ok but starting to get a tiny bit boring..
Ala
is 20% done
ok at first, I absolutely HATED the way the author writes. like WHAT DO U MEAN U DONT BELIEVE IN QUOTATION MARKS??? and also the whole thing about sometimes not having a subject in a sentence was CRAZY.
now though, I think I'm enjoying it. definitely the chapters with Ivan and Margaret. Peter's chapters a little less. it definitely seems like I'm just reading a crazy person's thought process.
I got used to the...
— Feb 21, 2025 01:10AM
now though, I think I'm enjoying it. definitely the chapters with Ivan and Margaret. Peter's chapters a little less. it definitely seems like I'm just reading a crazy person's thought process.
I got used to the...

