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Pyper (vanillaprtty)
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The biggest thing plaguing me throughout this book is the references to the characters multilingualism. Obnoxious and unrealistic. Maybe it’s a special and exciting ‘quirk’ for American readers but — as Hazelwood should know, given her upbringing — for people who HAVE moved around a lot or speak multiple languages, you don’t reference it so often (e.g., the poem “roughly translating” from French)
— Feb 20, 2025 06:04AM
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