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Mia is 34% done

He’s got way too many nicknames for her. We don’t really know what he actually looks like, he just assumed she was little as soon as he pulled her out the bin and everything is just jumping about. Not really a fan of this writing style. It feels like it needs to be fluffed out a bit but also cut down in other areas. It feels super rushed and assumed as well.

— Feb 27, 2025 06:20AM

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Mia is 79% done

So many unnecessary descriptive are used it takes away from the moment. It all feels messy.

— Feb 28, 2025 01:47AM

Mia is 78% done

He always brushes her over and distracts her with sex and I hate it. While she plays as a little, she’s still a woman and deserves to know things that are going on in her life…

— Feb 27, 2025 04:11PM