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oluv
is 53% done
Yknow when the hot and cold and back and forth just works? and it makes no sense for them to be together but the chemistry is off the charts?? Well if you love those tropes look elsewhere bc it’s not working here. *womp womp*
— Feb 28, 2025 08:55PM
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oluv
is 53% done
started off promising, I do like the concept and French-inspired world building, but it feels a bit too much on the nose for me. The dialogue is corny and it’s starting to grate, character interactions feeling kinda forced, even for YA/NA it feels like immature writing. pretty disappointing :/
— Feb 27, 2025 10:06PM
